The skills that I am going to incorporate into this next essay are that I am going to make sure that I am making all my ideas clear. Also to make sure that my voice is being heard. To reread my essay as many times I think it needs so that it flows right and there are very few grammar mistakes.
My revision goals are to look over my peers comments and also the comments Professor Emerson made on my last essay and when I think its all good make sure i’m rereading it so that I didn’t miss anything
Read my peers comments
Read Professor Emersons comments on last essay
Reread my essay
Fix anything i need to fix from the comments and look for things I can improve on
Once I think its all good reread it
I think my biggest challenge will be to make sure that i’m not repeating myself but also making sure that i’m getting my ideas across
If these challenges seem to difficult to overcome I will ask Professor Emerson what I should do in are meeting Friday morning
